Happy Valentine's Day to you. I Like the black and white, I think some of your compositions are working but some are too flat/simple. The house is too clipart-y, not sure about the record's placement. The other 3 are pretty strong, maybe try filling the frame more and cropping them/ moving them out of the center. I really like the guitar/bow tie, I think in their case the simplicity really works to its advantage.
Olivia- I sent you an email.. as well. Very iconic and literal. What sounds are you working with? I think you need to really think about the sound your working with, not the visual representation. I think you could create just black and white compositions.. I actually like that idea very much. Work with the idea of pattern, vibration, loud vs soft and how a sound makes you feel. -m
Happy Valentine's Day to you. I Like the black and white, I think some of your compositions are working but some are too flat/simple. The house is too clipart-y, not sure about the record's placement. The other 3 are pretty strong, maybe try filling the frame more and cropping them/ moving them out of the center. I really like the guitar/bow tie, I think in their case the simplicity really works to its advantage.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jordan, You're right, the house is very clip-arty.. hmm =]
ReplyDeleteOlivia- I sent you an email.. as well. Very iconic and literal. What sounds are you working with? I think you need to really think about the sound your working with, not the visual representation. I think you could create just black and white compositions.. I actually like that idea very much. Work with the idea of pattern, vibration, loud vs soft and how a sound makes you feel. -m
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